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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 9, 2008 20:51:06 GMT 1
It's great so far but could we maybe have more than one or two lines per update please?
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Post by Cetanu on Aug 10, 2008 0:14:54 GMT 1
I like that mask.
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 10, 2008 10:10:20 GMT 1
Anyway when is the next update?
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Post by Bone Crusher on Aug 10, 2008 13:02:27 GMT 1
Scene 4 (Back to the facehugged predator) The predators eyes flicker and he groans as he sits up. Suddenly he falls back and roars green blood seeps from his chest. CRAACK! A PredAlien chestburster sticks his head out of his host and hisses and crawls off into a nearby vent. Desperately the dying predator attempts to grab the chestburster but instead knocks over the other facehugger tank and slumps dead. The released Facehugger is different identical to the facehugger that infected Ripley with the queen in Alien 3. It in turn follows the PredAlien into the vent.
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 10, 2008 17:27:48 GMT 1
Awesome. That's better. More than two or three lines per post ;D
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Post by Bone Crusher on Aug 11, 2008 20:40:22 GMT 1
Anything you would want in this story dog alien ect.
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 11, 2008 21:00:11 GMT 1
A Carrier would be cool to see.
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Post by Bone Crusher on Aug 12, 2008 17:41:03 GMT 1
Any pred/human things
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 12, 2008 20:02:56 GMT 1
Oh. Maybe a Bad Blood?
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Post by Bone Crusher on Aug 12, 2008 20:13:58 GMT 1
so pred vs pred fight then
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 12, 2008 20:30:02 GMT 1
Yah. Please.
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Post by Necrosis on Aug 12, 2008 20:44:47 GMT 1
I like what I'm reading so far. You think you could add later on a Pred fighting a Deinonychus? (It's basically a huge Raptor species. A little bigger than a Yautja)
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 12, 2008 20:48:18 GMT 1
I thought that Deinonychus were no bigger than humans? Plus they're extinct.
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Post by Necrosis on Aug 12, 2008 21:10:13 GMT 1
I thought that Deinonychus were no bigger than humans? Plus they're extinct. Hmm....my dino knowledge has disappeared. I must be thinking of a different Raptor. Anyways, Deinonychai are extinct yes. But remember, Preds can live for thousands of years. It's most likely that Preds had been around during the time when Dinosaurs ruled the Earth. And even if this took place after Dinos died out, Preds could have captured Dinos from a long time ago and breed them on other planets. We've seen Preds capture Aliens for some reasons. Possibly for breeding prey. Who knows. Maybe Preds do that with other creatures (Including Raptors).
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 12, 2008 21:16:44 GMT 1
That sounds reasonable.
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