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Post by Bone Crusher on Jul 30, 2008 12:20:18 GMT 1
Now I am going to write an AvP story( mabe script) and I want to know what sort of stuff you would want me to include/ not include. Here's a little teaser: A lone Predator is sat in the middle of a barren dead world surrounded by stone walls. The Predator is armed with only his wristblades and is waiting waiting for something. A stone wall creaks and lifts upwards and then there is silence. Then a hiss and our Predator stands just as an alien leaps at him from the black door way. Let me now what you guys think. ;D
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Post by Purebreedalien on Jul 30, 2008 13:20:53 GMT 1
Cool, I like the sound of that. The good thing was that I could picture it. Here comes punctuation man. Between the two waitings you need a comma. Punctuation man, away!
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Post by Cetanu on Jul 30, 2008 15:06:00 GMT 1
Comma rules are hard. But not as hard as semi-colons. I hate semi colons...nice so far. Easy to picture.
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Post by Logan on Jul 31, 2008 0:48:54 GMT 1
I've taken a step away from avp and wanna write some StarWars FF,but this gives everyone inspiration,great idea,but I wanna see some paragraphs before I say SWEET!!111
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Post by Cetanu on Jul 31, 2008 3:31:10 GMT 1
Oh god, Star Wars. The tremendously large franchise with like fifty six thousand worshipers...yeah... But anyway, I think the story needs more...
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Post by Kud on Jul 31, 2008 7:30:28 GMT 1
56 million might suit it better eh? i dont worship it i only like the cool wars and such, kinda like LOTR only the war scenes... i wish they had an AVP war scene, like eg. thousands of marines vs 100,000ths of aliens and preds just amist the battle, thatd be sweeeeet
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Post by Purebreedalien on Jul 31, 2008 8:30:15 GMT 1
^ Heaven that would be, hrmmm!
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Post by Cetanu on Jul 31, 2008 21:40:45 GMT 1
Only if the Preds win ;D
Which we all know is possible. But....it is more likely that the chitin covered Aliens would win :'[
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Post by Purebreedalien on Jul 31, 2008 21:43:28 GMT 1
Only if the Preds win ;D Which we all know is possible. But....it is more likely that the chitin covered Aliens would win :'[ Preds seem to take the cowards way out alot don't they. Aliens just have to be beaten. Does it make you sad that you can never see your heroes win a fight?
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Post by Cetanu on Jul 31, 2008 21:53:45 GMT 1
Very much sad! The directors and authors always make the Preds lose...and they use Primal Tactics and advanced tech, not cowardice!
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Aliens are admirable, but I like preds more.
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Post by Bone Crusher on Aug 1, 2008 10:29:31 GMT 1
Scene one: Night in a small town all lights are off and a couple are walking home.
Bob: Come on honey we need to get home it's getting late.
Jane: All the lights are off everyone's gone.
A bright light shines above them drawing them upwards into the cloaked spaceship above them.
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 1, 2008 13:27:18 GMT 1
So it's a script?
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Post by Bone Crusher on Aug 1, 2008 15:34:58 GMT 1
Yeah I guess.
Ill add more later
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Post by Purebreedalien on Aug 2, 2008 10:32:18 GMT 1
Okeydoke!
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Post by Bone Crusher on Aug 4, 2008 11:19:27 GMT 1
Scene 2: Day on a desert world with a blue sun and an orange sky. On this planet there is a stone temple that looks a lot like Colosseum's on Earth. In one of the many rooms there is two alien eggs in canisters in suspended animation along with two preds.
Pred one: *Signals to lift the egg canisters*
Pred two ( a younger more inexperienced Pred who looks like Gill from AVP) *Grumbles in disapproval*
Both Preds lift up the canisters on to a tray and begin to carry it out of the room when one of the canisters falls and shatters.The facehugger leaps at Pred one as Pred 2 panics makes his escape sealing the door behind him. The facehugger latches onto the Predators unmasked face.
COMING SOON PART 3.
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