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Post by Purebreedalien on May 20, 2009 20:46:03 GMT 1
I have started a new site set in 2012 about a man-made virus outbreak which spreads from person to person and eventually creates numerous zombies all over the world. I will now run this site and SurvivetheHorde. I chose to create a new site for this because I wanted it to be large and have a different more 'complex', but simple, RPG style. Please read the backstory and look around ;D Can you Survive the Horde ?
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Post by Kud on May 22, 2009 11:27:08 GMT 1
(im not being mean, well....maybe i am but heres my opinion)no offence... the storyline sucks, AIDS isnt that bad a virus pandemicly and the 'zombie virus' wow man couldnt you think of anything persides that??? theres a lack of infermation and its all very basic, like resident evil but more boring.The site's colouring hurts my eyes and the banner could use some work as i cant tell if its zombies or scary humans.....its all very typical and basic for a zombie storyline....I actually find the AIDS part rather funny...Maybe it could be a cure for another strange disease or even cancer, maybe the goverment injected it into thousands as a vacine before realising their mistake.... i mean if they locked this guy away how would he get the means to change it? to alter diseases and such you need super powerful microscopes and shit...if hes locked up HOW did he injectet goverment officials in the first place???
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Post by This Old Hive on May 22, 2009 21:24:58 GMT 1
He's right on a couple things like the site's coloring is terrible and the banner doesn't look all that great, those are the two things I'd change first. As for the storyline I'm kinda getting sick of the whole lab making a super virus idea in general so I'd suggest making the origin of the virus unknown so that way people can have there own ideas of how the whole it all started. Also I'd put in more detail to the sites storyline but thats basically it.
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Post by Cetanu on May 22, 2009 21:29:49 GMT 1
Pubah originally had the virus be cancer, but I told him it was the same way in I Am Legend, so he changed and it hoped people wouldn't laugh. Anyway, I may join if the storyline is fixed a little.
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Post by Kud on May 23, 2009 6:49:36 GMT 1
ditto, and the colours
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Post by Purebreedalien on May 24, 2009 11:22:17 GMT 1
I deleted it, guys. No more Survivethehorde.
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Post by Bone Crusher on May 25, 2009 10:47:14 GMT 1
Pure don't lisen to those guys you do it, it has potential. Hell I didn't even get time to see it. There just Jealous because they have got no creative ideas
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Post by Purebreedalien on May 25, 2009 16:14:29 GMT 1
Too late now. I didn't expect it to get anywhere at all anyway, it was just a bit of fun and the story didn't effect the RPGs anyway. You just run around killing zombies, nevermind. It's deleted from existance now.
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Post by Cetanu on May 26, 2009 1:36:54 GMT 1
Well, at least you're not depressed over it I've had to kill D:L, AvP:S, and AvP:S #2 XD
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Post by Purebreedalien on May 26, 2009 11:27:34 GMT 1
Lol.
Locky.
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